I have just released the pilot episode of my 3-D animated comedy series, “Annoying Banana,” on YouTube (watch here:
https://youtu.be/KboZO9TDrCw?si=7QGdABm_fIovMJdo
https://youtu.be/nDXj1z89xyw?si=_-N81T5cAyH35Qru
https://youtube.com/shorts/CUIXM_U0ZZY?si=ctweTwDR8nyijzYy
https://youtu.be/_TlqNesn7js?si=CY55nctFho9LjIWe
https://youtu.be/UGQQKRTGV5E?si=TYyVUxkl4QIVWOfX
https://youtu.be/-IK4MdIu2zM?si=5IUlGW_hnkgVEBov
https://youtu.be/L6WPWSiUSuI?si=l21H3167RLHnZzRI
https://youtu.be/M0uyVlNAqBU?si=TWtiwqHEJ6qF3_Sc
https://youtu.be/GrMyMutbhu8?si=uNBrtU0ScxqUWM2m
https://youtu.be/R249a7VOPDw?si=QTRcDG_Zdd0Ahjho
https://youtu.be/Ts1y70kaa-8?si=kKfcx7Bmts6IyD5T
https://youtu.be/s76kCNr4nyY?si=78nav_Y15_Zvdse9
https://youtube.com/shorts/96NVddj7ZE4?si=1cPAhrHd_GT5n1yG
https://youtube.com/shorts/CUIXM_U0ZZY?si=o4OuAySo7CLVNivt
https://youtu.be/s76kCNr4nyY?si=pLVT9b7PPAT-ivVO
https://youtu.be/elDYEvO5TEc?si=w-2tcLxUfgqq6SSb
https://youtu.be/v1ZJvQnT85c?si=g0jH7rjW7SrCc4Tz
https://youtu.be/EGSkpe8TcTE?si=w2XIy81KK-MxgQD7
https://youtu.be/wzJSnvRU0KE?si=A0Klbl_Ghigs0g0f
https://youtu.be/Ts1y70kaa-8?si=VDtov0hpf4WnY4MW
https://youtu.be/Ts1y70kaa-8?si=VDtov0hpf4WnY4MW
https://youtu.be/hee9zxtUjVA?si=5JDvilmrzElZlPJ_
https://youtube.com/shorts/CUIXM_U0ZZY?si=XoeI0KnJKSFikknU
https://youtu.be/M0tsAD23HN0?si=RTvqGMdiO8IxipIf
https://youtu.be/FJRqfAr-lu8?si=aew0Rp0X3Wur5I9M
https://youtu.be/NVSZdDuVTmc?si=zi_mn0jfWpC8TTii
https://youtu.be/loLWsFgb_yA?si=oKwrTRanbU6foJZw
https://youtu.be/l98M_d1XMzk?si=BllnDk9iq_hxY4HT
https://youtu.be/qKCAegx4eRw?si=LASSAwHJr1uTiUQa
https://youtu.be/aUefsrTJNNg?si=EyBzBtOMsWfoLqxi
https://youtu.be/aUefsrTJNNg?si=EyBzBtOMsWfoLqxi
https://youtu.be/Y-aBCaU6s_w?si=RSoiVlS--sQZcMB9
https://youtu.be/bfhypBj7xlw?si=xa3g-ooCoDxJbvZo
https://youtu.be/MWP8g1wSz0c?si=gPyNL7DRKTHlrYVG
https://youtu.be/1ujjCVD9LW8?si=V7S7oo-CD5Qit63M
https://youtube.com/shorts/CUIXM_U0ZZY?si=-voVg_s5rB2vr1nC
https://youtu.be/crb9UY5NhAY?si=Vlb2plJIbzEkGNOb
https://youtu.be/CUU2jEkLAxU?si=y8Tbn-unrsDEsBqL
https://youtu.be/R249a7VOPDw?si=YS48rFx2oTKdpKC5
https://youtu.be/iyjIJQXhBOE?si=4cD3ZrVmWPs1TbD8
https://youtu.be/hee9zxtUjVA?si=23Ut3YmmuJ08LrQb
https://youtu.be/M0uyVlNAqBU?si=XodB0pptRi1lmnZf
https://youtu.be/LhLm8eLZesc?si=VzwvqsHe0jPPKseQ
https://youtu.be/FIDrqQW2FDQ?si=_PYBuT85CaYDxQfO
https://youtu.be/U4g390qF2rU?si=_1IrSNlxvToNc7jj
https://youtu.be/Q2g4tSXslTk?si=JOYuic1Lt-frQdQ7
https://youtu.be/O-quspDS8Rk?si=c68EL4lts3Fq64So). Before I dive into Episode 2, I want an experienced creator, animator, or digital-marketing-minded reviewer to tear Episode 1 apart—in the best possible way.
What I need from you
• A thoughtful, structured critique that moves beyond “good” or “bad.”
• Clear, actionable notes on the first 10-second hook, story flow, comedic timing, character appeal, animation quality, camera work, audio design, and overall engagement.
• Suggestions for stronger thumbnails and video titles that can lift click-through rate.
• Your opinion on whether the show resonates with both kids and adults—and if you’d personally subscribe, with reasons.
• A concise priority list of what must improve before Episode 2 goes into production.
Format & depth
Please deliver your feedback in a short report (PDF, Google Doc, or similar). Aim for roughly 800–1,200 words so each point is covered with enough depth to be actionable.
I’m building this series for long-term growth on YouTube, so honesty is essential. If something falls flat, tell me; if a gag lands perfectly, say why. Looking forward to your expert insight and ready to act on it right away.